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Thursday, January 16, 2025

Held Hostage by Moving Day by Olivia Salter / Flash Fiction / Contemporary

 

Ava McAllister's dream of a fresh start turns into a nightmare when a rogue moving company holds her belongings hostage for an outrageous ransom. Armed with determination, she unites a network of victims to expose the corrupt empire, risking everything to reclaim her life and help others do the same.


Held Hostage by Moving Day


By Olivia Salter 


Word Count: 938


The first box Ava opened wasn’t hers. Inside, she found a crumpled wedding dress, dusty with neglect, and a photo album of strangers’ smiling faces. Behind her, two men leaned against the moving truck, watching her with bored amusement. “You want your stuff? Pay up,” the shorter one said. His grin didn’t reach his eyes.




The driveway baked under the summer sun as Ava gripped her phone, the cool plastic slippery against her palm. Her new rental stood behind her, empty and lifeless. She could almost feel the air inside, hollow and mocking, waiting for furniture that hadn’t arrived.

“Ma’am, as I’ve said, the remaining fees are mandatory,” the voice on the line murmured. “If you’d read the fine print—”

“I did read it,” Ava snapped. Her voice trembled with anger. “This wasn’t in the contract. You can’t just add fees after the fact.”

The pause that followed was heavy with disdain. “You can pay now or lose your things. Your choice.”

The line went dead.

Ava stared at her phone, bile rising in her throat.


The truck pulled up minutes later, its faded logo peeling from the side like old paint. Two men jumped out: one tall and skinny, the other shorter and stockier. They moved with the casual arrogance of people who knew they had the upper hand.

“We’re here to deliver,” the taller man announced, tossing a clipboard onto the hood of her car. “But before we unload, you need to clear the balance. Plus fees.”

Ava glanced at the clipboard. The paper was blank.

“What fees?” she asked, her voice tight.

“Long-distance charge, stairs fee, extra insurance, tip. Standard stuff,” the shorter man said, smirking.

“That’s not what we agreed on!”

The shorter man’s smirk widened. “Take it up with the office, lady. Or don’t. We’re not unloading a damn thing until we’re paid.”

Fuming, Ava handed over her credit card, her hand shaking as she typed in the PIN. The card reader beeped, and the taller man gave a mock salute. “Pleasure doing business.”

The movers began unloading with deliberate carelessness. Boxes hit the pavement with loud thuds. A lamp toppled out of one, its shade rolling into the street. Ava scrambled to grab it, her heart pounding.

“Watch it!” she yelled.

The men ignored her. The last box they pulled out was scuffed and dented, the tape barely holding.

“This isn’t ours,” Ethan said, inspecting the label.

The shorter man shrugged. “Warehouse mix-up. You’ll have to call customer service.”

They slammed the truck doors and drove off, leaving Ava standing amidst a jumble of strangers’ possessions.


Later that night, Ava sat cross-legged in the chaos of her living room, surrounded by open boxes. None of them were hers.

One box held a delicate tea set wrapped in yellowed newspaper. Another had stacks of old postcards tied together with fraying ribbon. There were baby clothes, photo albums, and a faded varsity jacket.

“This isn’t a mistake,” she muttered, holding up a wedding dress sealed in a plastic garment bag. “This is intentional.”

Ethan frowned. “You think they’re holding our stuff hostage?”

“Not just ours,” Ava said. She pulled out her laptop and started searching.

A quick dive into online forums revealed dozens of complaints about Scams R Us Movers: exorbitant fees, lost belongings, damaged furniture, and stolen items.

“This isn’t just a scam,” Ava said, her voice steely. “It’s a racket.”


The next morning, Ava uploaded photos of the misplaced items to social media with a plea for help:

“Do you recognize any of these? Victim of Scams R Us Movers? Let’s fight back together.”

Within hours, the post went viral. Comments flooded in:

“That’s my grandma’s tea set!”
“They stole my son’s baseball trophies!”
“They ruined my life.”

Her inbox overflowed with messages, each one angrier than the last. She started organizing names, dates, and evidence, sharing it with journalists and lawyers.

Late one evening, her phone rang. The number was blocked.

“Hello?”

“You’ve been busy,” a smooth, cold voice said.

Ava’s stomach flipped. “Victor Harlow, I presume?”

The voice chuckled. “You don’t know who you’re messing with, sweetheart. People like you… they don’t win. Quit while you’re ahead.”

“Or what?” Ava shot back, her voice steadier than she felt.

“You won’t like the alternative,” Victor said, his voice low and dangerous.

The call ended.


The threat only fueled Ava’s determination. She partnered with other victims to file a lawsuit. Journalists exposed Scams R Us Movers’ fraudulent practices, splashing Victor’s face across headlines.

Ava’s story gained traction, and with mounting pressure, Victor’s empire began to crumble. Investigators uncovered warehouses packed with stolen items, many of them damaged or incomplete.


Weeks later, Ava received a call from one of the victims she’d helped. “I think I have something of yours,” the woman said.

Ava met her in a parking lot. From the trunk of the woman’s car, she pulled a box labeled Ava McAllister. Inside was Ava’s first-edition copy of The Bell Jar, its cover slightly scuffed but intact.

Clutching the book to her chest, Ava felt tears sting her eyes.

Ethan placed a hand on her shoulder. “You got it back.”

“Not everything,” Ava said softly. She thought of the family photos, the heirloom jewelry, and the small pieces of her life that were gone forever.

“But enough,” she added, looking around.

Their new home wasn’t perfect yet. The furniture was mismatched, and the walls were still bare. But it was theirs, and they’d filled it with love and hard-won victories.

Ava ran her fingers over the book’s worn spine. She’d lost pieces of her past, but she’d gained something stronger: a voice that couldn’t be silenced.

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